Comm: You are the real star.

~Hello! This is a one shot writing commission for Paradign! They wanted their two Oc characters in a cute little story! These characters belong to them so please do not use this story by any means or claim the characters. They all belong to the person I mentioned above! I hope you enjoy the story! Thanks for commissioning me!~


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You know how couples usually do things as a team? Together? If you do then you also know that sometimes they even do silly things to make their partner happy. one of these people was a male named Paradign. He was a dedicated man who made his girlfriend Lorlei happy on multiple occasions. When she saw him, he world flipped upside down like she was in a dream. He was so wonderful to her that she never wanted to let him go. He was hers and only hers. Any other female best find another mate before she bites their head off. They had been together for quite some time, long enough for other people to know they were a strong couple. If they were smart, not questioning their relationship would be the wisest decision they ever made.





Lorlei was outside of his house, clapping to the music that he turned on from his CD player. He wanted to put on a show for her, one she would never forget....but there was a problem. He was a very shy boy. Athough, He often went out of his way a lot of times just to see her smile. Getting her to laugh at what he did was a bonus in his eyes. As she swam in the ocean near the dock, she climbed her way up towards him with a enchanting look in her eye. "Oh Paradign. You are so handsome you know that? You do almost ANYTHING for me..and I appreciate it very much! Its like..you take me to another world I love to go to every time I look at you. I love every bit of it. Allow me to be with you FOREVER my love!" He chuckled with blush on his cheeks. "Of course dear. My love outstretches across the mighty seas for you. I would go anywhere that you need me to go. I would find a way for me to reach you. I love you that much." Paradign wished he could say that outside of his thoughts but he was too shy. Her silence turned into roaring laughter, finding herself completely pulled onto the docks. She grabbed his face with her wet hands slowly as she leaned forward. "Give me a kiss you handsome lad! I know you were thinking cute thoughts about me!" He laughed again but noticed she was getting close. He was going to run away from her but got pulled back in.





    After a few minutes of cuddles went by, she slipped by into the water. "Can you please feed me some of those lovely desserts you baked for me? I want you to feed me Paradign! I want to sit in your lap!" He looked worried. "D-don't you have to be in the water at all times? I do not want to accidentally hurt you." She tilted her head slightly. "No. As long as I stay wet I will be fine. My skin will not dry out I promise. Now you go before I steal you again. Go on." He nodded as he made his way to his back porch way above the beach. Lorlei watched him with longing eyes as he walked inside his house. She watched his every movement when he was around. She stalked him protectively to make sure no harm would ever come to him. When he came back, Lorlei sat on him quickly. Her hung over legs the docks to make sure the weight did not bare down too hard on his legs. "How is this?" He smiled. "P-perfect. Now its time for a snack. Your favorite. Pumpkin pie bites." She showed her sharp row of teeth. "Oh yummy! I can not wait! Give it to me!" He wanted to shyly back off from her but decided to stay. "If that is what you w-wish."




    Paradign feed her a wide variety of sweets he baked before she got there. Pumpkin pie bites were the main attraction of the dish, paired with other bite sized treats. Lorlei opened her mouth every time he put a treat near her mouth. "These are so wonderful! I know you spent so much time on making these for me! Your so sweet! I will make sure to give you as much treats as you can stand too!" He blushed. "B-but I was-." Lorlei laughed. "Not anymore! Its my turn! I only share my food with you! Now come here!" Paradign hesitated. His face started to get warm as she got close. When she did get close however, he ended up passing out. Lorlei's eyes went wide. "Paradign? Oh dear what happened!? I must have overwelmed the cutie." She laid his head gently on her lap. "I will guard him until he wakes up."



    All of the couples visiting the clear ocean side seen the couple on the docks. There were a lot of "Ohhhs. Awwws. So cute." Paradign lived on a famous local spot where the Beach was very known for its clear water and calming atmosphere. Lorlei did not care if anyone was watching them. She only cared if they started to give her precious boyfriend any trouble...or if any other girls tried stealing him from her. "Sorry but hes all mine folks." Paradign looked at her with a  warm expression. "I dont think they are interested in me Lorlei. I think you are the real star in this O-ocean." The Succubus then made a high loud pitch laugh that extended for a whole minute. "Oh! Listen to you! giving me all the credit! YOU ARE THE ADORABLE ONE!" He wanted to kiss her back but did not have the courage to. "I-I love you every bit for being you. Now, would you like to see more music from me?" Lorlei nodded. "of course! Only after everyone else leaves though. I do not feel like sharing you." Before he could answer, he was showered with kisses from her. "I love you too baby!" He was completely stunned and could not say a word. 








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                                                                                                            Story By: Cherry-the-ninja